An excellent chapter overall. It introduces yet another player, and touches on a sub plot. I am still wondering what will happen to that girl sitting on the doorsteps of Hell...
My only (monor) complaint is that this chapter is too short.
Teyah (the girl in Hell) will be seen again. Remember, she's trapped there until Arden completes some unspecified bargain.
One can only wonder what kind of bargain Arden made with Hell to let her pass, eh?
the chapters have been comeing in realy slow latley i wonder what the problem is