I like the "From the Wings" story. You've got a good plot and character development going. It's my turn to have to wait for new chapters.
Please keep up the good work.
Hikaru
Thank you very much for the good words. It doesn't go as fast as I'd like simply because RL keeps me quite busy, too. For the record, Chapter 3 is about a third done and, among other things, you get to see Lee and Lyman at work (now thee's a challenge for a writer, making engineering interesting ::G:: ).
Thanks again,
Cateagle
Ok Chapter One of A Tale of Two Sabrina's has been posted.
Plus it already had a couple of reviews.
One good
One good but writing needs improving.
Well i knew the writing thing would get me into a bit of problems there. I like to do it for fun and i try to cut corners where i can. Learned too much editing i guess. So descriptions get left out and people get lost. OOPS have to work on that a bit.
I want to thank those who read the first Chapter hope you liked it.
Chapter 2 should be up on the weekend.
TTFN
M White
Ok.....Chapter 2 is done but.....(there's always a but ) I want to get Chapter 1 fixed and reposted to help things along a bit. Some very nice people have lent their talents to helping me.
So we'll strive for Wednesday.
Talk to you soon.
M.White
Ahem.....well Wednesday got shot to heck....really sorry.....seems my story had more problems than anticipated. Two is definately done, but i really want to post a Revised Chapter one with the new chapter 2.
So sorry bout the delay...i'm looking to this Wednesday.....
TTFN
M White
Well finally got the next chapter up......going over this story is a bit difficult for me. I wrote this over two years ago and remembering the finer details of the story was hard.
Plus i really didnt know i had left out a lot of details essential to make the story make sense.
Many things have been pointed out to me and others have corrected many of my blunders. So to them i tip my hat.
Thanks.
Well i'm back on Chapter 5
TTFN